Thursday, 1 March 2012

A documentary made by me

It is my first attempt and i need your comments and feedback to further make improvements in my work. Looking forward for your feedback

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uX-72WnF2A8

7 comments:

  1. Its a nice compact documentary, the only issue seems the voice recording, the little more clarity in audio quality would have made more impact :)

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  2. yes i know i hadnt proper resources to record the voice :( but will try my best in the next one

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  3. Good effort tabi!I guess voice over isnot by you?
    Over all it is a very good effort! specially the script has a grip!

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  4. yes voice over is not done by me and thank u for the appreciation

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  5. please can somebody guide me where I can find the stories related to Umar kot fort

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  6. one story that is famous is of Umer-Marvi we all know and that is part of Shah jo Resalo by Shah Abdul Latif Bhittai!

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  7. well yes but other than that the birth of akbar and any war that had taken place as there are few canons in the fort

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